Throughout your teaching life, you will have moments of discovery-about who you are and what you truly believe as a teacher. I've had a number of those through my career. The first one was that I would switch from the traditional method of reading and become a more "Balanced" Literacy Instructor. Not in the sense that is today's "Balanced" Literacy (Which is a farce-but that's another blog post!) Another was when I discovered that I was truly a great writing instructor-because I loved to write and I learned from the very best! Karen Padgett-may your retired teacher time be the VERY BEST, wherever you are! Yes, I learned from a very wise and knowledgable peer! Not some crazy writing program that everyone hates-but REAL teaching! REAL TEACHING!
So, when I found myself saying this, I was completely SHOCKED- "I don't know how to teach writing anymore!" Yes, I said that-because I didn't. You see, I've been bogged down in writing programs-Lucy Calkins, Write Traits, Top Score, Making Meaning Writing-you name it, it's come my way. In that moment I realized I needed to STOP THE MADNESS and go back to the Karen Padgett way of life-write every week with a purpose! Just Write! (Oh, wait, that was ANOTHER program I tried!)
Here's how this breaks down day by day:
On Monday you introduce the prompt and plan. That's it. The key to this method is in the simplicity of each day. When students get overwhelmed, they don't produce the writing you expect. That is what I have learned over the years of teaching writing-small chunks for small kids produced the best results. And so does planning! So many people skip this part but it is the KEY to excellent results. It takes the ideas for writing from higher order thinking to the knowledge level. (Read more about it here!) So, planning is KEY!Tuesday is modeling day for the teacher and writing day for the kids. Again, I take this in small chunks. I start with proposing a grabber, or introduction, statement. Here is something to keep in mind-kids WILL copy you. That's what modeling is-the opportunity to show a technique. If they copy it, so what! Really, I mean that! They will eventually venture off into something different-I PROMISE! What you are doing is loading their tool kits with ideas. You just have to remember that your introduction statement is no different than a list of ideas you would put in a writer's notebook. Once I get the introduction started, I form my three ideas and add those to my paragraph. I finish with a strong closing-again, a modeling technique that allows kids to grow their tool kits. Then, I give students the time to write their introduction-and that's it! And, yes, I do this week after week!
Wednesday arrives with a little more writing. I will often model my opening of the second paragraph. Then I continue to write while students write their second and, many times, third paragraphs. This is where I should take a moment and talk about the end of each writing period. Students are always sharing throughout this process, in the form of the last 5 minutes of the writing period. During this time I provide specific feedback as to what students have done correct in their writing. I also provide ways to boost their writing. This is the specifics of paint a picture with your words, using figurative language, boosting strong verbs, and any other opportunities that present themselves. I always phrase these things in positives, such as, "One way to strengthen your writing would be...". This allows students the opportunity to change their writing and for others to apply this same idea. Many times, I open the writing period with this same technique.
Thursday arrives as a time to complete any of the remaining body of the essay. Again, I start with a quick modeling of what I am working on within my own writing. Do not underestimate this part! The more we model writing, the better it is for students. And, it actually improves our own writing! If we can grow as writers, we can help students grow! Depending on the process we are at in writing, I may even model my conclusion. This is where it gets tricky. You don't want to jump into the conclusion until you are sure that you have modeled it time and again. But, if we are on a short week, or Friday is heavy, then I will model this process at this stage.
And, finally, FRIDAY! As I just said above, on Friday we work to complete the conclusion. This should always include a restate of the topic, followed by a reminder of the information inside for an expository or informational and an opinion piece. For narrative, you are looking for a wrap of the ideas, the solution, and a lesson learned. Model, model, model these ideas! In addition to this, it is very important for students to then edit their work. They need to read it out loud to others and check for spelling and grammar throughout the week.
I am actually super excited to be going back to this method and seeing what my students can do. Yes, by the end of all of this we will be moving into how to add information from readings into our work to get ready for fourth grade! But, this is where we are going to go from where we have been! No more programs, no more jumping around with ideas or things that are taught. Just modeling, embedding instruction in real learning, and letting kids learn how to REALLY write! Here's where I'm starting!
You can find this in my Teachers Pay Teachers store and it will soon be part of my January Writing Prompt Bundle! I hope you join me in this simplification of writing program, because it WORKS! Let me know what works for you! I'd love to hear your ideas!
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